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Making a good song of silents isn't as easy as many may think. You need to make it more atmospheric. Get a clear visual in your mind then expand and build apon that so it takes you deeper into the place we call imagination. You just didn't do it for me. When it began all seemed well but then it became blured and repeated itself more then I could tolerate, it went no where.
You've composed better stuff then this, "follow your fathers example
Fox"
Author's Response:
this is my first song I've ever made
when I uploadet it for about one year I wanted to get some feedback
and I'm fine with it =)
maybe you should listen to my other stuff it's more than 2 instruments played by hand ;)
thank you for your review
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Not my pick for a song to remix but I'm glad you did it. Could've been worse if it was someone else. They wouldn't have tuned in the drum and bass as well as you have.
{Things to improve on}
Nothing.
Author's Response:
Hahah, awesome :D
Thanks a lot mate!
but seriously, nothing to improve on? :p
I'm sure I would have done it better if I made this today! :S
.. but yeah, thanks ^^
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It's got a lot of diddly diddly di and a lot of dooooooooooooing, and a pinch of dodo do do dodo do. In other words it's a song that concentrates all of it's energy into a short verse rather than stretch itself out know what I mean. You cleaned up a messy room and gave everything it"s place>
Author's Response:
Man, sorry but that made no sence.
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This sounds terrible! Why would you make something like this? Fair enough you wanted to share your music with us but this is so awful! No one wants to hear a 80's printer playing metal, god!
Author's Response:
I said it was stupid. What part of that didn't you get?
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1 minutes about the right length of time for a song like this if it was used.
Wish it didn't repeat so much at the end, could've gone somewhere after that.
I strongly agree with Garnish7. It would best be played as backround music, maybe for a certain character. Perhaps a six year old, yeah... have it as Ness's theme
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You've got your self a major cd on your hands with all these Banjo Kazooie songs coming out your arse. Hard to believe thaty you did so many of these with vocials so weird, in a funny way though.
Good stuff, can't work out how to point out flaws so yeah...
Author's Response:
I can do it, out of the time a fair amount, croaky voice every so often, peaking allot, poor mic quality and cuts wheres I start new parts. But thats what makes my songs mine, thanks for the review
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To vocialise Gobi's Valley is indeed one of the strangest and most unlikely things to happen, but it did. Doing a good job on being strange now that's skill. What a attention seeker you must be and a big one at that.
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm just bored and have nothing better to do with my free time. The only reason I put the 1st one up was because I found it funny, then because I found making that fun I made another, and eventualy I pretty much covered the banjo kazooie spectrum and covered many other game songs. You could say it was to get attention, but its not because I don't and never have. So possibly im chacing a impossible dream, of which I do not know. I don't really use NG anymore, but that doesnt mean I dont have a huge backlog of songs that where never submitted, im just waiting on some VA results.
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Think this would be great for an introduction if you ever made one. And your right, it does bare mechanic like sounds similar to a certain Rare game I played but I just can't remember which.
Final thoughts: The wind up effect and clanks turns it into a... toy themed level near the end of some Video Game, much like Donkey Kong 64.
Author's Response:
The stage comes in about halfway through the game. It's meant to be more of an arms factory, one that produces weapons, yunno? But I can see how it would sound like a toy factory too.
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If you've ever finished a Video Game RPG that mainly concerns boy girl relationships and watch the credits it's kinda like this. You know the kind, girlys jumping on matresses eating each other with pellows with tastless Japanese sexual humor that I hate. And realise I can visualise all this in my head right now not something I'm proud of. (Flash) This isn't happening!
If it makes you feel better your song fit's together perfectly, even when it changes tone completely at 1:26.
Not that I hate it it's just that your jams bring back memorys of ending themes from Japanese cartoons... That's not good... No, no, that's umm, bad! Bad times, reaaallly bad times. They eat at me when I'm fast asleep but disappear when I sit up screaming!
I'M NEVER GOING BACK!!!
Author's Response:
Umm... I'm sorry...? I... Heh, I don't really know what to say. I didn't mean to?
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"Atlantis may erupt from it's bellow"
Dude, I don't know how much you changed but that was some darn good work.
Can this really be a remix, cause so much additional tones were added to the song.
Now! Come out of the shadows and become dignified, have a purpose, and serve it well.
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