Score: 4

"Taking you down town"

submission: Knuckles in Angel Island

date: December 13, 2009

People say that I just bag out Japan because I'm unable to accept other races but that's not really my fault nither is it what I do. I mean it's easy to tell that your some forigner other wise you wouldn't have put in some freaky segments about knuckles falling asleep and having dreams about beating sonic in some off screen video game and the one about rouge was just wack!

And what about a preloader? Newgrounds have them up for free it's only a tutorial away. You make me mad man, you make me mad!

Score: 10

"Great lines from a great game"

submission: "We're Starfox!"

date: September 18, 2009

Firstly you did a ground breaking performance with the Star Fox memes. No one could comprehand fitting so many quotes in one single scene. Loved the menu too that shit was cool. The animation was decent, after all wouldn't expect stunning visuals with such long screening time but they were good. I'm rather surprised that someone would make something that was made in 1996 in 2009. Not that I'm complaining, it's just disappointing we had to wait so long to see something like this.

You have made a veteran laugh!

Score: 8

"Fast loading"

submission: The Future Wasn't There

date: September 17, 2009

I think for a silent flash you perfected the story telling without the need of dialogue.
If you had added this thing without music your score would easily be cut in half. Chris Zito did a great job in creating the theme, suited it so well.

The moral of this seems to be a matter of importance, like... he wanted to see what the future was like and the idea seemed like such a good thing at the time he couldn't see what he had in the at the beginning. But he seemed like a good bloke, spending so much time on building a machine isn't enough to put stress on any relationship, atleast I think. Everyones different I guess.

Animation was great, the main character seemed slightly less detailed from the rest. Probably due to him being the most animated. I don't know how you made this such a fast loader and at the same time being so long. Great work.

Score: 7

"A bit like Metroid just not as good"

submission: Opaquely Clouds

date: October 17, 2009

Making a good song of silents isn't as easy as many may think. You need to make it more atmospheric. Get a clear visual in your mind then expand and build apon that so it takes you deeper into the place we call imagination. You just didn't do it for me. When it began all seemed well but then it became blured and repeated itself more then I could tolerate, it went no where.

You've composed better stuff then this, "follow your fathers example
Fox"

Score: 8

"Thanks for making it"

submission: RMX - Jinjo Village

date: October 6, 2009

Not my pick for a song to remix but I'm glad you did it. Could've been worse if it was someone else. They wouldn't have tuned in the drum and bass as well as you have.

{Things to improve on}

Nothing.

Score: 7

"Exit my arse"

submission: Earths Exit

date: October 4, 2009

It's got a lot of diddly diddly di and a lot of dooooooooooooing, and a pinch of dodo do do dodo do. In other words it's a song that concentrates all of it's energy into a short verse rather than stretch itself out know what I mean. You cleaned up a messy room and gave everything it"s place>